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//"Bye, Mum! I'm going to the library to do some research for my school project." shouted Jane before she left her house. When Jane reached the library, it was not very crowded. There were some students at the tables reading some books and a few adults at the shelves. Suddenly, Jane spotted a boy behaving suspiciously behind a shelf of books. He was holding a pair of scissors in his hands.//

So Jane ran towards the boy to see what he was trying to do. They boy was shocked to see that Jane was behind him. Jane asked, ''What are you trying to do?". The boy kept quiet and tried to ignore her. Before Jane could stop him, he had already cut the pages of a book into pieces. He ran as Jane called after him. He was nowhere to be found. Jane informed the librarian about the incident.

Together with the librarian, Jane went to search for the boy. After a long search, they found him hiding behind a bookshelf. The librarian questioned him. He cried when told that his parents would be informed about the incident. His parents were so mad with him. He would have to pay for the books with his own pocket money. When it was all over, Jane headed for home.

She told her mom what had happened. Her mom asked about her brother. Jane had forgotten all about him! She ran as fast as she could. Her brother was all smile when he saw his sister. Her brother was wearing a school uniform and was trying to claim Jane down. Jane feel very upset after the boy had cut the pages because that was one of her birthday presents that her parents bought for her during her birthday.
 * (This paragraph is confusing. Jane's brother was not mentioned in the first paragraph. The book that the boy had cut was in the library. It was not Jane's present.) **

Why was the brother mentioned here? There was nothing written about the brother in the previous paragraph!
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You could also include the following points in the composition to make it better: 1) Description of the boy 2) How did Jane feel after the boy had cut the pages? 3) Why did he cut the pages of the book? 4) What were his parents reaction when they arrived at the library? 5) Was the boy punished? If yes, describe the punishment and how he felt.

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